Awesum enough said
I really like the background sound that peacefully sets the mood for the cheerfull conversation...
Then suddenly it stops to point out the characters discontent with what he just heared from the guard!
And then our hero goes on a rampage. (with lots of humor)
A perfect rant about everything thats wrong and adds up in the beautifull crafted game by bethesda softworks, the beloved SKYRIM!
Then the ending is a fine piece of work too, with the hero cooling down apoligizing but our guardsman just had to push it a lill further!!
NOOOS WON DYAAA (dragon shout!!!)
Please keep up these sort of toons!
I also like the overal animation man well done!
the lyrics, the music and the animation is pretty neat man
it all fits together perfectly....
and ofcourse its funny as hell!
how did you come up with it?
Well first thing that happened to me i got into riverwood and at night when nobody was around to see i slaughtered a chicken and resurrected it as my lill zombie slave..... after a dungeon raid suprise suprise the entire town hunted my ass across the fields/planes and through the forest? and for what >.< a damm chicken! stupid beast only gave me a chicken breast as loot lol!
especially the ending with the dragon squashin everything xD
The reason i gave this game a 8/10
is generally about couple of reasons (not trying to deminish your hard work cause the game is absolutely great but I think you can do iven better!)
1. After a while iven with the new rooms it gets boring (once you get the hang of it, it plays by it's self mayby add suprise events? like a health inspector that comes to check in? our a lightning storm that destroys a room, accidents anything to keep the risk of it getting dull halfway through)
2. I saw one other post saying the same thing? why do only singles enter? are there no kids,families or couples? (perhaps im lookin for to much though so dont take number 2 too serious!)
3. About 2/3 star you should lower the money atleast in my experience you started to earn way to much (yes the costs of buildings increase but if you play the game at speed 4x and you have everything figured out you make to much xD)
4. When the game is finished perhaps add challange mode? (cause i dont see the point in building up and up and up and up, since i alreadie expanded to the max left and right)
5. make sure the loan gets a decrease button to instead of only increasing!
and now for some ass kissing xD hahahaha
i really did enjoy the game and like i said you all did a great job!
so still a top game! and a well deserved 8/10
keep it up!
basically thats it if you ask me.
peace out lads and gals.
The reason i gave you 4/5 instead of the 5/5 is the following:
((forgive spelling mistakes please hehehe!))
everything is very detailed and perfectly executed however if we look at it anatomically shes a lill short yet fat? its like shes being pushed down twice as hard by the gravity of earth instead of a normal persone, not really sure how to explain but i hope you understand the picture im trying to describe! short and plump like if you shortend her body length but not adjusted her width. this could also be due to her hip armor (cause ofcourse im not sure if its padded or just laying ontop of her hips adding more width).
also last point i feel like theres something wrong with her eye, the look shes giving gives me the impression theres something off with eye placement (could also just be the shadow thats throwing me off!)
Nevertheless with all this said! very nicely done! great artwork hope seeing more of your work here!
Sincerly a new fan! ;) haha!
Thanks for the great feed back. I do know what you mean that a few things just seem a little off. This was a very difficult task to over come for me. My greatest challenge in drawing are female characters. I do understand she looks bulky but I was compensating for the thickness of all that gear she has on. I will continue to push forward and make my weaknesses into strengths!
this is not really mature if you ask me this would fall under (E) everyone our (T) teens at the highest m8!
further more if you done it yourself its pretty decent so iven though i cant stand the jonas brothers im just gonna rate the overal picture and the artwork and thats a solid 8 in my book!
lol no i did not draw the piece i knew people dont like the jonas brothers , ep on this site, its like a no no, but it is part of a product design like for a toy... no i did not draw the picture ect,. its an altered photo
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